Author: pierrebouviertranslationediting

Professional translator and copy editor. Translation: Dutch to English (native) / French (native) to English (native) / Spanish to English (native). Copy editing and proofreading: English (native).

The feel of an actual book

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My French translation of Britta Bolt’s Lonely Graves as Tombes Solitaires, undertaken as a labour of love and a gift of friendship to Rodney Bolt, still faces a long journey dealing with its original publisher’s foreign-language rights and permissions and (I hope) eventually catching the attention of a willing francophone publisher. That journey has yet to start and who knows when and if it will conclude. Meanwhile, however, I could not wait to see it as a book, to touch it, to feel it in my hands, to share it with my parents who edited it and with relatives I wanted to read it. Thank goodness there are online companies that print texts in various formats at reasonable prices. This way I get to hold an A5-sized paperback of Tombes Solitaires for my own private use. No matter what happens otherwise.

Tool of the trade

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Always dreamt of owning the Compact Oxford English Dictionary. It arrived in the post today, and it’s beautiful. The pages on gossamer paper each corresponding to nine pages of the complete edition, the magnifying glass, the sheer heft of the thing, the tactile old-school feel of the print version. And it’s now a legitimate expense for my translation business.

Lonely Graves / Tombes Solitaires

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Sometimes translation is just a labour of love: When my dear friend, the novelist and travel writer Rodney Bolt, in collaboration with Britta Böhler, wrote Lonely Graves (2014), the first volume of the Pieter Posthumus trilogy set in Amsterdam, featuring a tenacious civil servant who investigates mysteries he stumbles across in the course of his work for a city department that deals with the abandoned or unidentified dead (including providing a ‘Lonely Funeral’ to those who remain unclaimed – the City of Amsterdam really does this), my mother, a fan of Rodney’s work, commented that it was too bad that no French translation existed (a Dutch translation was published, first, as Heldhaftig (2012) and a German translation followed as Das Büro der einsamen Toten (2014)), because she would have liked to share the book with francophone family and friends who would appreciate it. She suggested that I translate it into French, with her assistance as editor and proofreader, as a personal project to that end, the result of which I could also present to Rodney to do with what he would. I thought it an intriguing though daunting idea (having done little English-to-French translation by then, as opposed to French or Dutch to English, and never before of a literary text); I set it aside. Until the pandemic struck last year and professional commissions dwindled, an ideal time for a private endeavour. And Lonely Graves is genuinely a page-turner of such calibre that the translation flowed almost effortlessly. I began on 22 January 2021 and was finished with the first draft (which I actually altered only minimally thereafter) on 11 February. It was an absolute pleasure to translate Rodney’s atmospheric, detailed, witty and exciting Mokum crime novel into French. My mother and father provided invaluable help as readers, editors and proofreaders. And it was an even greater pleasure to (nervously) surprise Rodney with the finished work, which he received with grace and delight – I could not have asked for a better reaction. This was a true labour of love (which also cemented my confidence in translating fiction in the future, and from English into French as well as the other way round) that brightened a bleak pandemic winter, and I am immensely proud of Tombes Solitaires, both as a translation and as a gift of friendship. But should any crime fiction publisher happen to read this, Pieter Posthumus definitely deserves to be introduced to a new audience in the francophone world. À bon entendeur …

Slavery

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Honoured to have been able to contribute to the Rijksmuseum’s upcoming Slavery exhibition, a landmark examination of Dutch involvement in slavery and the slave trade during the colonial era, as well as the continuing legacy of that involvement, through the personal stories of ten individuals, ‘people who suffered under the slavery system, people who rose in resistance against it, and people who profited from it’, by translating nine of the fourteen texts in the exhibition catalogue, Slavery: The Story of João, Wally, Oopjen, Paulus, Van Bengalen, Surapati, Sapali, Tula, Dirk, Lohkay.

Unterwasserbuch Revisited

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Just as for countless others, 2020 was a dark and very lean year for me, the pandemic delaying or scuttling projects and decimating clients’ budgets. One bright spot, however, was translating art historian Antoon Melissen’s elucidating essay on the context of the famed Unterwasserbuch (Underwater Book), a 1971-1972 collaboration between artist Joseph Beuys (1921-1986) and photographer Lothar Wolleh (1930-1979), which has now been reissued as a 2-box cassette (containing a reprint of the original publication, the new essay and other text material, as well as prints unearthed in archival research), just in time for the Beuys centenary in 2021. A year in which we can all hope to come back up to the surface…

Feest – Ed van der Elsken (2020)

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A rare pleasure of a translation amid the darkness of 2020, as well as a glimpse of the more carefree world of 60 years ago, commissioned by the Rijksmuseum: the new text accompanying Feest, a hitherto unpublished photobook of festive images of the Netherlands and beyond in the 1950s and early 1960s by famed Dutch photographer Ed van der Elsken (1925-1990), now compiled from his archives and according to his design by the Rijksmuseum and Nederlands Fotomuseum.

Vingt fois sur le métier

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boileau

《 Avant donc que d’écrire, apprenez à penser.

Ce que l’on conçoit bien s’énonce clairement,
Et les mots pour le dire arrivent aisément.

Hâtez-vous lentement, et sans perdre courage,
Vingt fois sur le métier remettez votre ouvrage,
Polissez-le sans cesse, et le repolissez,
Ajoutez quelquefois, et souvent effacez. 》

“Before you write, first learn to think.

That which is well-conceived is expressed clearly,

And the words to say it flow with ease.

Make haste slowly, and without losing heart,

Twenty times replace your work upon the frame.

Polish it ceaselessly, and polish it again.

Add sometimes, and delete often.”

— Nicolas Boileau, L’Art poétique, 1674